Figmented

Would he also feel the same,
Over his pessimistic thoughts.

Would he also feel the same,
Over his layered smile.

Would he also feel the same,
Over his unusual happiness.

Would he also feel the same,
Over his figurative words.

Would he also feel the same,
As I heard,
The silence of  unspoken words, Through his heart,
Wanting me to decipher the range of those words.
Or Is it just a figment of my own imagination.

© Dakshali Gupta
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Author: dakshali27

A women who's still searching her wisdom via art.

0 thoughts on “Figmented”

  1. Those are great lines! I feel your great intelligence. All the “Over his…” They were wildly fantastic. I might consider changing “Those silence…” to “The silence…” Also, I might consider changing “it’s” to “is it.” Just some ideas to ponder, Thank you for that poem.

    1. First of all Thank you very much, for your suggestions. I’ll definitely implement on it as I’m new in this field of art of words and I’m still learning in this field.

      I had firstly wrote “The silence” only but I don’t know what came into my mind and changed it to those silence.
      Okay, then what if I changed “Those silence of unspoken words to the silence of those unspoken words”??
      Would it sound good???
      And so far as concerned for your changes in the it’s to is it, I’ll definitely do that…becoz I also feel the same for it.
      And once again Thank you for your appreciation. Glad to know that someone read this poem so keenly .Thanks!

      1. “The silence of unspoken words” should work. And you are welcome. Sometimes, we are too close to our work to see/hear the subtleties. That’s why there are editors or friends.

    1. Ohh.. It’s my pleasure, Bhumi. There is no need to say Thank you.🙂

      I would also loved to read your blog , but currently I’m not feeling in the state of read anything and to think anything..
      But will sure, read your blogs tomorrow 🙂

    1. Thank you so much, Kishan.

      I always tried my best to pinned the pics related to the poems.

      Sometimes I get the right pic and sometimes I don’t !😑

      But I can’t get through your second sentence that ” every single figmented ” .
      Kindly plse elaborate !😅

  2. It’s my core pleasure to go through and feel your piece.
    By my side, I assume your poem have made every reader slip in the pool of that imagination ..

    1. Hey, Kishan.
      Thank you so much for your kind words .
      Glad to know that you liked my stuff very much and always submerge in that imagination for forever !😄.

    1. Hahah … Don’t know that’s why I called it figmented !

      Thank you so much for your kind remark !
      Thanks a lot 😊.Stay blessed ! And stay connected 🌸

      1. Dikhali, I m a toddler at wordpress. But still I will affort my best to compose more pieces .🙂
        Really ,I m glad to know that you loved my blogs . Your words of appreciation truly means a lot. So much thanks .🌻🌻

      2. Dakshali, I m a toddler at wordpress. But still I will affort my best to compose more pieces .🙂
        Really ,I m glad to know that you loved my blogs . Your words of appreciation truly means a lot. So much thanks .🌻🌻

  3. Dakshali, I m a toddler at wordpress. But still I will affort my best to compose more pieces .🙂
    Really ,I m glad to know that you loved my blogs . Your words of appreciation truly means a lot. So much thanks .🌻🌻

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