Red

RED – The Colour of Pride

Red,
The colour that unites everyone.
Red,
The colour that gives meaning to every women.
Red,
The colour that transforms girl to women.
Red,
The colour that bleeds through them.
Red,
The colour that makes them strong inspite up all the cramps they get.

Red,
The colour that stops them to open their wings,
Stupid superstitious customs, behind that game.
Although, there are many people,
Who won that game.
Inspite of all the chains, clenched them tightly.
They won that game.

Red, gives them strength to fly.
Fly,
Up above the sky,
Where there are no boundations.
Fly,
Up above the sky,
Where there are no chains, that clenched them.

Red,
The colour of their lips,
Which gives sheer glow to their face.
Strength to empower their power.
Red,
The colour which unites everyone,
Is the reason for our seperation too.

This patriarchal society,
Wanted us to be down and down.
They can’t see them to fly.
They can’t see them to rise.

But, Oh My Dear,
This world is changing so fast.
The era of mobilization is spreading so fast.
Chains that you used them to clench us,
Is the key to our success.
Is the key to our success.

© Dakshali Gupta

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Author: dakshali27

A women who's still searching her wisdom via art.

0 thoughts on “Red”

  1. Wow…Dakshali… So nicely you’ve explored a small topic RED.🌼💙
    I like the Hammering words over our so caller civilised society i.e. Patriarchal society….

    1. Hahaha…this is not a small topic bro…It seems just a small topic but in reality it is the story of all women that they have to go through.
      Yes, it is hammering word but it is the truth to our society, which can not be changed so easily…. because sometimes women also knee down to the patriarchal world and accept them.

            1. Hahahah….I am too a amateur Ankit . I am too learning for the great poetry skills.
              But, it is good to hear from you that my poems keep aspiring you. It is always be good to learn from one another. 🙂

    1. Ohhh great… Congratulations for that.
      Yes, Apart from the colour of love, Red is also consider as the colour of pride.
      Thank you for sharing !☺️

  2. Your imagination level 🔥🔥and drawing imagination into beautiful words 💞💞.
    Red colour would be so happy after reading this poem 🤣🤣.

      1. Red is alive who said that it’s dead, he had just gone for party with his friends black and blue showing this poem that i too have importance 🤣🤣🔥

              1. Haha bs bs . It’s true at all . Not true at all was my case you say me a genius 😀 I like it but it’s not true 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

              2. Plz plz enough , but you have great humour 🤣🤣 . If the words you said are true then you must be a genius as you also didn’t accept when I have said to you 🤣✌😁

    1. Yes, you are right Madhuri.
      Thank you loving this. I know this is very common topic, but I haven’t write something about this, so just penned it down.
      Again, thank you for your sweet feedback 🙃

  3. The great depths you have gone to explore the world of red to make a statement about freedom is literally beautiful <3

  4. Ohh let me make story more interesting a new character enters that’s white since white and black are best friends and white is annoyed that black is giving more importance to pink. 🤣😅😁

      1. Since black is more focused on pink and it has two more competitor blue and red.white and black are childhood friend the most famous jodi of all time black and white 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣✌. Now the story is over rest I will write some day 🤣🤣

          1. I was just an instinct that was coming through my mind when I was reading your poem red and reply to my comment . You write such beautiful poem💞 then I may get another topic to make a story 😁🤣✌

    1. Thanks a lot Aakanksha.
      You know there’s a friend of mine whose name is also Aakanksha…not Aakansh, and she always used to corrects everyone.😂 I think it is her blog only …but no problem I get new friend in this WordPress 😄.
      Stay connected dear 😊🤗

      1. Actually the same matter is with me, most of the poeple spell it wrong and even pronounce it wrong…😂😩 I don’t think it’s that difficult😂 I’m glad I met you here fellow poet. Much love 💜

    1. Thank you so much ,
      Basically, I tried myself to show the weakness of women to its empowerment.
      Glad to know that you have liked it.
      More to read from you .😊

      1. It’s very good, Weakness makes a person strong, women should come out from their weakness and should get empowered! And what you have written is very much Appreciated!!

  5. Dakshali , you have made an extraordinary piece which is widening eyes as well as mind’s coil. How smartly the worthy tight truth was coated with simplicity. I am summing up my reply that your every line has a powerful verse and your brilliancy collect these all types in a single piece.
    Thankyou to share worthy lines.

    1. Thank you so much, Kishan.
      I am really humbled by your comment. I don’t know what to say right at this moment.
      Really thank you very much.
      Thank you for the support for always being there for me.

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